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Post  fishyperson Sat Oct 13, 2012 1:40 am

This is a song that I wrote, then one of my friends changed how it was set out. The first verse is the chorus, so please comment!




Waiting for the time
When I expected you.
Nowhere here. Not right now.
I give up, you know it’s true
How much you hurt me.
By being you.

We used to be inseperable.
But now we just don’t get along.
You are unjustified.
When have I ever done you wrong?

You hurt me.

I find that you’re unfaithful.
So all I do is sit and cry.
You know I’m emotionally unstable.
It’s spiteful and just cruel, so why?

You know it’s true
How much you hurt me.
By being you.

You could have the courtesy to tell me.
Then we could break it off, and break up.
Instead, you leave me in the dark.
And head off to what you call the ‘pub’.

“Not right now”
I give up, you know it’s true
How much you hurt me.
By being you.

Alone and forgotten,
Tears falling down my face,
Tear tracks in my heart.
Memories are the strongest killer of all.

You know it’s true.

So, I sit here, growing
Number and deader by the second.
We used to be happy. Inseparable.
It used to be I followed you beckoned.

Waiting for the time.
Not right now.

But now, what’s left is nothing.
No feelings left at all.
Not sure what direction.
Just knowing that you won’t stop my fall.
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